One night I was in my bed and couldn’t fall asleep. I looked out my window and then I saw a bright light. It was a UFO! I ran outside and the aliens came out and took my neighbor, Colin. Then my friend Thomas came out and saved Colin by hitting him with a sword. Then we went back to bed. But then another alien went to Thomas’ room and wanted revenge. They tried to take Thomas and Colin tried to save him but the alien took Colin instead. But then we past the bookshelf and Thomas grabbed a book and knocked him over. We ran for our lives!
A fun story – I wonder where you ran?
Be careful with “slang” and “informal” voice — You wrote “I looked out my window”. We all understand what you mean, but more correctly you should write “I looked out of my window”.
Great stuff.
what happened to the UFO?