Once upon a time, I was looking out the window. A few minutes later I saw something fly by and then I saw a bright light. It was moving towards my house! Then I saw butterflies flying and flowers blooming. I was very surprised. Then I blinked and it was gone! I figured it was all just a dream. It was morning so I crept down the stairs. My mom was in the kitchen. I told her that I had a weird dream last night. She said she had a weird dream too. She started to tell me about how she saw a bright light moving towards the house…
To Sophia and Laura
I love the ending! It ties in nicely with your beginning and made me curious, thinking if it was the same bright light!
Great descriptions! I like how you describe the flowers blooming. I wonder where else you could add in describing words.
From Mrs Natusch
Team 100WC